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yidneth A Spanish Fairytale
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:19 am Post subject: NEW SONG: gathering FEEDBACK (temporal link!) |
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well this is the second song for the short movie, most of you had already listened to al atardecer, a very short piece for the credits, last night precisely i ended up putting up the vocals, yet again a collab with daniel tejerina but this time even more interactively ), taking part in both music and lyrics, it's a very simple song, hmm it's just out of the toaster. Yes, as the other atardecer bit very sad, but well according to the screenplay, it has to be sad and almost depressing LOL hahahah i guess they contacted me cos of so, hahahahah
so any feedback is welcomed, so far it's temporaly linked here
www.yidneth.com/data/mp3/...egundo.mp3
the lyrics goes as :
Once i was told i have no soul so in its place it's left a hole
but if it's so why does remorse keeps on reminding me all things i did wrong?
unspoken sins that i regret, a thousand secrets i long to confess
i failed the truth, deceived myself, but i just found nowhere else to run
so i run away through the twisted turns of fate
till i realized i got lost again and i fell and prayed not to be awake
will this heart of mine start to feel again?
i know it will somehow when this dream comes to an end
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i'm making other sad song about kira, but well i'm happy to say i'm making two joyful songs now, one celtic, sort of celt pop with cath, and anothe pop song in spanish called (eres una araña (you are a spider) very cynic, but definetly not very sad LOL )
Edited by: yidneth at: 11/28/03 5:05 pm
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bbchris Princess Of Hongkong
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yidneth A Spanish Fairytale
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:46 am Post subject: Re: :)) temporal link! NEW SONG! |
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thanks chris
this is not kira's song, it's sad and i'm sad cos of kira which inspires me a lot, but this one is for a short movie here in spain. You think we should upfront more the vocals at the beginning, this has been a fast mix to be honest LOL
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yidneth A Spanish Fairytale
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:56 am Post subject: Re: :)) temporal link! NEW SONG! |
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it's for a short movie yes,
it was filmed in Bilbao, and the preview got pre-featured in some festivals, so the director decided to make a better soundtrack, that has to be ready for december, i'm working along with the composer of the soundtrack, but honestly i'm being superfree, to make whatever i please over the basic chords, and even interact with the music, recordings and such, daniel is a supergreat composer to work with and always respect your turns and decisions too which was great )
the short movie has a very hmm well it's SAD, definetly, not my cup of tea of argument but I carry on with the soundtrack so i guess i'll love to watch it when ready LOL. it's about a spirit of a medium-age man that chooses to leave heaven for purgatory or something like that because in heaven you don't have to long for nothing anymore and he keeps on dreaming about the woman he loved and he keeps to forgetting about her there, or something like that, hard to explain )
tells his life and decay in flashbacks too,
well the voice is much quieter at the beginning itself, cos i sung much quieter, the fact is that the volume is leveled as a whole, so it was a coincidence lol dunno
i'm not much in technical things,
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bbchris Princess Of Hongkong
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yidneth A Spanish Fairytale
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droolymutt No Underblurb
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 5:44 pm Post subject: Re: :)) temporal link! NEW SONG! |
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listening... - like I don't know you..
like the vocal treatment......
cymbal wash is too loud......
song is too short - no "structure" to it.....
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yidneth A Spanish Fairytale
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droolymutt No Underblurb
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droolymutt No Underblurb
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 3:14 pm Post subject: Re: ummm |
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doesn't HAVE to have a certain structure, smock.....
That's just my personal preference.........
.smack.is.still.in.here.dammit.
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yidneth A Spanish Fairytale
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:31 pm Post subject: :) |
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we remixed the vocals again, so i'll replace the song for a sound with less reverb, it's sounds clearer i think,
drooly it's perfect licit that you like songs with other structure, ) it's your taste
well if it were me only, but i had guidelines, from the director and from the basis of the composer, so i just had to follow them, and make my work. musically that was the time and premade basis i had, and i rather not to repeat verses but try to tell all the things i had to say during it, it shows during a passage only, probably they will even split the actual recording fading it out and only taking the chorus or the intro, i don't even know yet
it was fun
i'm making now a song with catherine duc, and one spanish pop song XD which is gonna be funny to sing i needed a break with something a little bit less,... moody LOL, but well.. i'm also proud they contacted me to express sadness, and i didn't dissapointment, so i consider my job well done )
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droolymutt No Underblurb
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:37 pm Post subject: Re: :) |
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Quote: so i consider my job well done
lol... - so do I, Pris, so do I...... - truly.....
I'm sure you understand the meaning behind my harsh way of expressing myself....
¿usted?
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