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need some beta-reading of some lyrics
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yidneth
A Spanish Fairytale
Joined: 12 Jun 2002
Posts: 780
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2003 6:49 pm
Post subject: need some beta-reading of some lyrics
does it makes sense?
i have not much game to add or quit words considering the music
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Some might think I've lost, spoiled it all, done all wrong
But I am relying on one last hope
And I (and I...) will leave and find my way to you
as evening darkens into night
and blackness falls to break/undermine my will
before deciding where to lead (from here)
to wake tomorrow
in that dream (that) i'm by your side
and if it sux LOL i also will be very grateful you tell lol
XD
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AQUARIAN AGE
Austrian Peacekeeper
Joined: 22 Dec 2001
Posts: 612
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2003 8:34 pm
Post subject: Re: need some beta-reading of some lyrics
.........
I did real @#%$,
you said that´s it,
it was all wrong.
(I´ll write a song)
Hear what I feel,
(can this be real?)
Come hold me tight,
it is still right.
Lets have some drinks
(your breath real stinks!)
come hold me tight
(is it still night?)
Give me your love,
(I´ll be above?!)
don´t let me creep
(I fall asleep!)
.............
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