i'm gathering some feedback on my lattests :)

[yidneth]

and i've not been much lucky (well besides the one i made with MIke, THANKKKKKKKKKKS MIKE)



but well i've also been recording myself and there are three new recordings that i would like to gather your opinions even thought it's only my and my keyboards

so here i go



THE WILLOW'S LULLABY VOCAL VERSION



THE CALL OF THE NYMPH



AND NOTHING 2003 RECORDING



i'll be grateful on comments on any of those





Hugs





Pris



mp3.com/priscilla_hernandez

[debbie mannas]

Pris, I love your voice, your emotion, the melodies of your songs, and most, the IDEAS and lyrics behind them - because I have read the lyrics. One comment I have to make is that I find some of the words indistinct when you are singing, which is a pity because they are so good, and they tell a story.



Just my tuppence!



Funny story: In my song "Bodytalk", someone thought the words "and your body tells me what your mouth denies" sounded like "and your body tells me wash your mouth tonight"....

[debbie mannas]

I know you are not a "native" english speaker (whatever that is, heh), yet you speak and write English beautifully, and are able to express yourself in a way that many native english speakers cannot, believe me. I just think all of us dont realise that when singing, some word endings/vowels sound different from a speaking voice, so need to be exaggerated to come over normally to an audience.



My choir teacher used to harass us for hours : bite your lips, make an "O", make and "eeeee". For example, to sing Love, you have to say "Lawve" (like law-v) otherwise it'll sound like "lave", (wide "la" sound) etc etc. Needless to say, I have thrown all those rules out the window since singing raak moosic, cause apparently nobody listens to the lyrics



In any event, your songs are beautiful so I hope this is constructive criticism. Perhaps it's just me that notices these things maybe because it was part of my training, so don't mind me!



You should hear me speak - I have a sing-song Indian accent...



Cheers - you deserve every bit of the recognition you are getting, and then some!

debbie

[bbchris]

Hi Pris! Am listening to "THE WILLOW'S LULLABY VOCAL VERSION" mmmm nicely passionate and beautiful - how wonderful to sing about a willow.



"The Call of the Nymph" Wow! You made this track all by yourself - excellent! I can see this track on a documentary on animals or history. It's quite majestic at times. Well done! Your creativity is amazing. I like this one the most out of all three.



Nothing 2003 - Interesting concept for a song. Nice piano playing. I like the simplicity of this track - matches the lyrics.



Thanks for posting Pris!

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[yidneth]

debbie, critics when constructive are welcome

i will work hard on my pronunciation, but i cannot do miracles, it's an evolving process glad you liked them, I loved body talk ) by the way ) and you have an amazing voice



bbchris, you're a sweetheart

thanks

[debbie mannas]

Thanks Pris, coming from you thats high praise!



I only know one language. Can you imagine what crap I'll be singing and writing if I attempted another language hahaha. And I cannot produce songs either. You should be over the moon at what you do.



Just keep em coming!

xx

d

[yidneth]

thanks chris and debbie

well, in all my lattest excepting flame i'm managing the production alone with my keyboards, it's not impressive and i wish i were good at guitar (i'm learning) but well, for demos, that is what they are , i think it's fine and show where i intend to go. I'm particularly proud of nymph because i think it's a really twisted song, the only problem was to write it down as sheet music as the girl that makes the sheet music for register, wasn't sure about how to add all those chants and hissings,

so i registered a piano version of the song instead with all the basic arrangements on it and the musical line



nothing is simple, a simple love song, but it's from the point of view of a ghost, if you relisten to the song from that point of view, you see it's really sad , i like nothing because it took me a while to play that piano allright



and thanks awfully for listening girls, love ya



dEBBIE, about other languages, i'm composing one song n japanese right now, gonna be terrible LOL, and just to remind you YOUR VOICE IS AMAZING

[droolymutt]

lololol........





I love reading Pris's posts for the charm of the way she expresses herself.......

[debbie mannas]

EXACTLY what I think too. simply delightful reading.



Pris, you express yourself far far better than tons of people I know who speak perfect (ugh) english hahahahaha.



BTW, I am curious to see what you'd sound like singing an english song in with a spanish accent. My favourite accents in songs are french, spanish, and italian. I dont mind japanese or korea either, love the curling rrrrrrrrr sounds.



Isnt it fascinating to watch and hear people speaking in different accents? I love it. Some things make me laugh, but its all good! Swot makes the world such a wonderful place!



Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[KristinaBode]

Hi Pris



I hope you are not wondering, that I write now so late,



but I don't like to answer a so important thread, when I could not find the right time for it.



First I hear THE WILLOWS LULLABY and



wow it sounds great!!



I already like your voice, could tell you it thousand times



I like your three songs, THE CALL OF THE NYMPH is very very good,



I know that you are not using the software cubase very long and the result are very impressing....





Can't wait to hear more from you!

GEMINI

Edited by: KristinaBode  at: 6/26/03 8:57 pm

[yidneth]

thanks Kristina



have i told you lately how much i love your songs too ? )))

i've listened to sooo many kristina's songs that i would recognize her voice among one thousand and one million even )

[bbchris]

Yes!! Kristina has a distinctive voice!! I love it's tone and power!

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