** Balanced Serenity **

musicVision · Joined: 16 Nov 2001 Posts: 324

New profusion track ...

"Balanced Serenity"

...just a kick beat beat :cgrin

...And if anyone would be gracious enough to give it a review in their spare time, I could include it in the song's description on my page! :smokin

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MIKE BURN · Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 3:21 pm Post subject: Re: ** Balanced Serenity **

You're becoming better and better with every new song release

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A athmospheric tune with tasty sounds and modulated arpeggios and a cool tight drum beat/sound

)))

To be constructive I would say that over some regions the song-arrangement is a bit 'empty'. I would have added probably a few synth-pads or doubled melody-lines to enrich the 'lonelyness' :lol

MIKE

musicVision · Joined: 16 Nov 2001 Posts: 324

Thanks Mike!! :cgrin

Always some good professional feedback... and positive! :cgrin

I definitely can agree with the emptyness, but I actually have had this track laying around for some time because I was intending on doing some vocals on it...... but.... obviously didn't get around to it.... or they're way too low to hear :laugh

Perhaps it's nice leeway for a remix though or even a future vocal-version.......

.....care to lend your vocals Mike?!?!

It could be a different step in the wave of McBurn-Montgomery collaborations! :banana

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Edited by: musicVision at: 11/26/02 12:06:00 pm

musicVision · Joined: 16 Nov 2001 Posts: 324

i seem to have broken emoticons !?!? (test :bomb

)

*****

NEVERMIND :clap

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Edited by: musicVision at: 11/26/02 12:06:47 pm

bbchris · Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 3:44 pm Post subject: Re: ** Balanced Serenity **

Hello TONY! THe wonderful creator of :banana

I'm listening to your track and it's got a perfect title! It feels ever so slightly Asian to me as in Oriental..... I enjoyed listening to it very much. Keep on writing!

Jane Eliz|Blah Blah|Thinking Out Loud|Today's Song|

MIKE BURN · Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:33 pm Post subject: Re: ** Balanced Serenity **

Quote:
....care to lend your vocals Mike?!?!

Errrrrrrrrr..... worth a try in any case

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MIKE

musicVision · Joined: 16 Nov 2001 Posts: 324

Thanks Chris!! Glad you like it :banana

You'll lend your vocals Mike?!? :cgrin

... BTW - I have a couple new lyrics (just wrote them in the past 3 days) if you're interested :cgrin

...and I'm actually quite satisfied with how they came out. They're a little different than my usual, I think?

Let's see if Mike's email is working :cgrin

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MIKE BURN · Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 8:43 pm Post subject: Re: ** Balanced Serenity **

YO!

I just sang something on your track.....

....only a example how I hear/feel that thing.

I'm aware of vocal-misfunctions and lyrics screw-up's...

.....it's just to give you a idea and that I'm doing something.

Test-Rape-Of-Balanced-Serenity

I think I'm in a sentimental mood today! :lol

MIKE

bbchris · Posted: Sun Dec 01, 2002 2:41 am Post subject: Re: ** Balanced Serenity **

"Test Rape" hahahahaha What have you done to Tony's track?!?! hahahahahahahaha

J/K!

Very sentimental indeed. It's got potential! Keep singing Mike. :banana

Jane Eliz|Blah Blah|Thinking Out Loud|Today's Song|

musicVision · Joined: 16 Nov 2001 Posts: 324

YES...

I think some reverb (or distant vocals) and cool processor effects could

make it sound pretty darn cool....

little rearranging of the vocals/tone and it would kick ass I know... give the test sample some leniency :laugh

can't wait to hear the next mix of it !!!!!!!!! :banana

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Edited by: musicVision at: 12/1/02 4:21:08 am